Snippet Time!

[owlmoose]

You know the drill! Post a comment with a snippet of your story. A sentence, a paragraph, a bit of dialogue, whatever you're most proud of producing in the last few days.

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[dagas_isa]

"..You've got the tools, right?"

Balthier patted his vest. Of course he would insist to be the one to do the actual kidnapping. The self-styled leading man would never let someone else rescue the damsel. "I never leave the Strahl without them. I find they almost always have a purpose."

"Rikku's windows are barred, so you'll have to undo those. They're same construction that you'd see on a Bhujerban jail."

"Oh, and when were you in a Bhujerban jail?" Fran asked.

"That would be a story for later." Really, could we not go into those embarrassing little details of the distant past, when we had a kidnapping plan to execute?

"Anyway, that sounds like some serious protection for Daddy's Little Girl," Balthier observed.

I shrugged. It wasn't like Balthier was unfamiliar with the idea of daddy issues himself. "They are having something of an ideological disagreement right now. Rikku just happens to be right."

"I see. Well, our business is with the coin alone. As long as that promise is genuine, we've got business."