Your story sounds like it has some nice mysteries involved. It seems like lots of great final fantasy viii stories have that kind of premise. I feel like the game itself encourages this, with all of the unanswered questions it leaves.
Also, urgh maybe this time I can post my comment in the right place. That's what I get for commenting when I first wake up. :(
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Date: 2010-07-10 12:37 pm (UTC)Also, urgh maybe this time I can post my comment in the right place. That's what I get for commenting when I first wake up. :(