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KJ ([personal profile] owlmoose) wrote in [community profile] boss_battle2010-09-03 06:01 pm

Progress Report #2: Snippet time!

The approach of the summary-sharing deadline gives us another opportunity to share snippets of our works-in-progress. Share a sentence or a paragraph in comments! :D

[identity profile] pearlrose86.livejournal.com 2010-09-07 05:49 am (UTC)(link)
So! I just started writing mine, because I am classy like that. (I need NaNoWriMo-style deadlines in my life to get ANYTHING DONE apparently!) But here's a paragraph I rather liked from the first bit I've written.

Neither wanted a large wedding. Zidane positively hated fancy dress, and the thought of having to be stuffed into a black tie and tails made him pale with fright. Garnet was, at heart, a shy girl who longed for a small, intimate wedding. But when you’re the adored Queen of Alexandria and the Great Hero that Saved the World, a small wedding is absolutely out of the question.